All Comments on 'My Son and His Friend'

Good start, continue with your next installment.

How soon before son returns.

Love the nude swimming to start.

I see where you are going with this, but considering the act wasn't incest (yes taboo but lets be honest in this section we prefer incest), it could have been hotter if you didn't write so little, and started a new chapter (instead of a 2nd submission) with the son, and then later all 3 which clearly is where you are going with this.

If I didn't refrain from voting I would give you a * for you do what I can't stand. You give an appetizer but not the whole meal and not realize seconds, minutes, and hours go by before or even if you post part 2 and by then the magic we feel from the first submission has already left us.

No one is so good that you stay interested and horny for part 2, 3, and so on. If we are horny, it's sure for another reason.

Now that I say this, you are getting a * for the reasons I listed. Don't do it again!

I must go along with live4thebj about hating short, multiple submission stories. In fact I usually read any story that indicates it is part of a previous story only after I've read everything else. Not rating this one since I want to be fair, but I will try to catch the next part and give a score based on both.

I don't mind multipart stories. I DO mind the writer not caring enough about its own story to warn about before opening the story.

Hopefully you will continue this as a series - or at least a few chapters out - need to hear about son and mom!

Needs a good editor/proofreader syntax and preposition errors abound. Sex is good, grammar not so much :)

A read. Thanks.

Excellent story, She's certainly one very Hot mom! I enjoyed the way the story developed and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Ken xxx

Many moms like to tease son and friends. It is fun to get them aroused and know they jo with mom in mind. Usually just a little show but sometimes things go further.

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With a lady like that as your mom, I would have spent more time at home. I like this story.

we all need a follow up continue with her and jimmy then with both guys

But 'Jimmy' is just a wrong name. Most incest fantasies seem give baby name to the boys, like Jimmy, Tommy, Bobby, Billy etc. IRL you don't see these names on teenagers all that often. I would drop the 'ly'.

Reminds me of many a summer swimming naked in the pool my swimsuit tucked in the corner under the water feeling the freedom of being naked hoping that my mom or my sister would not see me. Slowly stroking myself hard and then wishing that my mom or my sister would come out and catch me naked fantasizing how that conversation would go and where it would lead . 5*

As a mother of two boys, this story truly excited me. I've been teased by their friends and somewhere deep inside, I think I would be amiable to being seduced by one of them. The boy are older now and their friends still come by and my mind still wonders about them. One in particular is always friendly, good looing and I'm sure interested. If I had a pool, would be fun to take a swim with him.

Lovely and erotic story! I love it - I hope you take a moment to read my Mistress Mommy story, I just posted it today (03/23/2021.) I know you'll love it!

Use of a "SpellCheck" would improve this.

Nice story. Sexy and fun and arousing!

Short and sweet. I like the length.

Good emotional content that builds up the sexual tension.

FUCK ME RIGID!!!!

Pleasant fantasy. Poor spelling and grammar was a bit of a ditraction.

. . . off to a great start . . . can't go wrong with swimming pools and hot weather . . .

Wow! Great story.

Very hot indeed. I have had a somewhat similar experience and the emotions were spot on. 5 Stars!

Great story - thank you! Great build up and great delivery - so hot!