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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Please.. Part 2..

You had better continue this.. have them stay another week in Hawaii, fucking..have them go to dinner, dress up, mom wearing sexy clothes likes skirts, nylons heels and then have them go home to deal with Mark. She gives mark an ultimatum and ultimately decided to divorce Mark after learning she's pregnant.. let it continue with Mom and Son having a day to day relationship like husband and wife and they make several babies..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
NANC!!!!!!!

.....welcome back!!

Sequel, if you would be so kind.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wow

Awesome story . please give us a second chapter .

NancDanceNancDanceabout 6 years agoAuthor
Sorry it took so long

I honestly don't know how real authors do it. This story was sort of done in Dec but I just couldn't bring myself to finish it. Apologies.

I did have some feedback early on and I was very timid in uploading it with the father son scene. In the end I decided to leave it in because well.. I enjoyed the idea of a son physically dislodging his father from his "rightful" place ;)

Let me know what you guys think.

P.S. to that anonymous user who has a problem with incest... not sure you are in the right place.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More..

Nancdance..don't end this at 2 chapters.. write several.. more mom and son.. more lingerie, hosiery.. like the other commenter said.. let them spend a week by themselves and fuck... Let them go back and is confronted with and ultimatum from Mark... She chooses her son and she finds out she's pregnant.. give us a story of their life together as mandate woman.. but yes nylons really spice stories up..

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 6 years ago

So fucking hot! I love son cuckolding dad with mom stories!! What's going to happen when they get back? Another chapter, please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Fantastic

Once again you hit the mark five stars from me. I loved that dad help instigate this loving wife to spread her mature thighs for their loving son. I love that mom decides to carry this incestious loving to the next level. I love that dad has to sit in airplane with his hard cock thinking about the last sounds he heard that of his wife begging their son to impregnate her and the slapping of sex and grunts and groans of two incestious lovers. Dad will either have a bad case of blue balls or be forced to go to the lavatory and jerk himself off in the toilet as his son humps away with his mother and fills his mothers fertile womb with his seed. I hope you continue this amazing story, I want to know what happens on this extended vacation and upon the return home.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Mixed bag

There are some very funny bits near the beginning. But later there are stupid sections like sex on the nude beach. The trick used to stay behind in Hawaii was dopey too. Overall the sex scenes weren’t hot enough and the plot contained every cliche in the book. Better luck next time!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Men don't wear bikinis

Bikinis are 2-piece costumes for women who cover their tits.

Men only wear trunks or 'budgie smugglers' or whatever you want to call them (usually 'speedos' for Americans it seems) but not bikinis.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved It! Want More!

I love stories with mothers on the thick/BBW side and this is no exception. Breeding and impreg aren't even big kinks of mine but you made it hot. I definitely want more :)

redlion75redlion75about 6 years ago

3somes when Mr is like the line from Ghostbusters don't cross the streams (dicks)

RichardGRichardGabout 6 years ago

This was great. There has to be a part 2. Please.

doorknob22doorknob22about 6 years ago
Thank you for not falling for all the tired cliches

No wimp husband, no tiny cock, no mindless bimbo. Great realistic characters and conflicts. Well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
horny aussie

Loved this story as much as your Martin's Family Sire, now please write a second chapterand lets see her giving birth to quads, then triplets, then twins etc etc until they have as many as her age will allow, maybe you could get her mother, Travis's grandmother in the act even an aunt or two. If I could have given you more stars you would most certainly have gotten them. Thank you

Leotardstights69Leotardstights69about 6 years ago
Great Story

Please add Second chapter 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

ManoBlueManoBlueabout 6 years ago
The only thing...

Some his replies were meek, man bro.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nance dance has outdone herself. Bravo ma’am bravo 👏 !

I’ve read all of nancedaces stories and this is the best. Please make a part 2

bwmombwmomabout 6 years ago
So yummy

Mmmm, such a lucky mom. I'm sure dad will come around to her way of thinking soon enough. If not, oh well...lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice

What a wonderful and delicious ending 10/10

Motherlove1310Motherlove1310about 6 years ago
Awesome

Please continue the second and many parts. Let him impregnate his mom again and again. Involve the grandma and aunts and sisters let him impregnate them all. Please sir.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Dad gets even

Husband sends text to wife.

Locks changed, credit cards cancelled, your cloths on driveway. Hope he can pay for his own education while raising your bastard kid

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The way it should be.

Glad her son is putting a baby back where he came from. I hope they make her soon to be ex husband pay for it all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The ending killed it.

I was thoroughly enjoying the story, then the last two pages just ruined it for me. It is totally the mom who decides on lack of sharing, not the son. Going to have her way and a new baby despite whatever the dad says. Hope she'e ready for life as a single mother, because dad will be gone!

And so much for the son's education. Hope he learns from this.

Arsenal_chanArsenal_chanalmost 6 years ago
Good story but the ending.

From the story I take it that the son and father have a good relationship. Maybe for the second part you could explore the guilt the son was feeling. When they come home the son would do anything to make it up to dad. idk even get his girlfriend to fuck him or something. The mom would be pregnant but would also be worried for her marriage. The son would refuse her advances because of his guilt. The ending would be mom coming home to find son and dad fucking sons girlfriend. idk just a thought. The way it ended is bugging me a little is all

lockedhubbylockedhubbyalmost 6 years ago
misleading title

good story, weak ending, and title has little to do with story.

Thom6595Thom6595over 5 years ago
Hot story

Very hot story, I didn't want it to end.

Ian ShergoldIan Shergoldover 5 years ago
Another hot story....

Thanks, NancDance. You are rapidly becoming one of my all time favour authors with your hot (and even better) consistent stories.

One thing I may disagree with: The title. The son may not like sharing but the mother definitely didn't.

More! More! More! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good start to a Hot plot.

I liked the migration of the story. First that dad was willing to share but then that dad was out of the picture (maybe). Mom knows what she wants and she shall have it.

One thing I like to see in these stories is more specific description(slowed down) of the action. Of course that makes the story longer but also hotter. Just my opinion.

I too hope to see more of at least Karen and Travis. Soon. 5*.

Kitist02Kitist02over 5 years ago
Drat. I had a great response but fumbled it clear out of the computer.

She has made her position quite clear.

Being one of the BTB fans, I'd have to go along with "Anonymous 04/xx/18"'s comment about closing accounts, changing locks, and dumping his wife and son's belongings out onto the driveway (assuming they have one). He should close the accounts by phone while he is still in the air and initiate divorce proceedings when he hits the ground.

You wrote an excellent cuckolding story. I'm enjoying the frustration of the protagonists in your other work, too.

4Boots4u4Boots4uabout 5 years ago
H is for Hawaii

It's also for hard, hot, and horny. This story made me all 3. Kudos to you.

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 5 years ago
"My Son Doesn't Like Sharing:" - Forty-Four Year Old Married Mother, Karen Reasor and Eighteen Year Old Son, Travis Reasor and Cuckolded Fifty-four Year Old Husband, Mark Reasor.

Truthfully, I'm torn as to whether mother Karen is playing her husband, with whom she feigns to still have deep feelings (love ??) for, against using her son's youthful vigor, staying prowess and frequent urges to fuck her with his virile larger-than-her-husband's dick while satisfying her youthful wantonness! Husband Mark has gotten what he has coming to him, since his being "cuckolded" by using his son to fuck his wife, is his own permission and idea! Personally, I would rather Karen and her son Travis stay in Hawaii--or some unknown location--and have her attorney mail her husband divorce papers!

"NancDance" has provided us with a rather remarkable story, with a theme and plot that is unique, risky, thrilling and quite suspenseful, titillating and sexy! I did give her FIVE (%) STARS due to the the distinct possibility mother Karen will be impregnated within the next several days, before leaving Hawaii; hopefully it's twins (in my minds incestuous imagination)! The writer has a knack for exciting impregnating mother, and son incest. I'm not sure if NancDance has a son or not, but ALL son's secretly imagine the female love--and body--of their mothers as the own sex angel!!! Accolades!

oldmooseoldmoosealmost 5 years ago
Loved it

Colt mounting mare-Hot! Son and dad dp-ing mom-hot! Son impregnating mom-hot! There's certainly room for a follow up and I'd love to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What happen

Best thing for pop is share with dad. What about baby?

C_frommnC_frommnabout 4 years ago
oldmoose I agree

There should be a follow-up. they eventually have to go home and Dad will have left or learn that Travis does not share. making him the complete cuck. esp. if wifey gets preggers.

HragsHragsalmost 4 years ago
Keep it going for us readers !!!

Enjoyed reading this series. Hope u add more chapters. Thank You

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123almost 4 years ago
"My Son Doesn't Like Sharing:" - Forty-four Year Old Mother/Wife, Karen and Eighteen Year Old Virile Son, Travis and Fifty-four Year Old Vasectomy Husband/Father, Mark.

Since having first read this story March 2019, it seems to have grown more maturely with the passed months. It appears to have more feeling of compassion and love of a mother to her son...and less love and caring for her husband. The story could have been more detailed in the love and romance scenes between Karen and her son, Travis, especially after she decides to have her second child by impregnation of her son, her new lover. Nanc, we avid, eager and wanton mother/son incest lovers eagerly await for an additional chapter that's all well, and ends well. You do work magic with words, and mothers loving her sons!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Where Ch 2??

You're such a good writer, there should be a chapter 2.. see what Travis and mom do during the few extra days in Hawaii . Have them come home and Dad has to accept that Travis is now mom's side guy.. pregnancy and all.. come on ..please..we need a CH 2

Bigking1310Bigking1310over 3 years ago
Love your story narration

I just love your story narration. It gives me so much joy and happiness reading this story, these are the same feelings i have for my mom. And I hope and I pray that I get my mom .

Once again thank you for this story 🙏

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 3 years ago

"My Son Doesn't Like Sharing:" - Forty-four Year Old Married Mother, Karen Reasor and Eighteen Year Old Virile Son, Travis Reasor, and Fifty-four Year Old Vasectomized Husband/Father, Mark Reasor. Having previously read this story three times now, within the past two years as of March 2019, my opinion of this very unique and suspenseful story only gets sweeter, more realistic and one of my all-time favorites. Nanc has a fantastic mind for an almost perfected mother and son incest. I'm glad mother Karen did not allow the anal attempt to occur, as I'm not a fan; that aspect made this story for me as one of the Great's of All Time! Fabulous...and by all means, keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It whould be very more hot story if one of the father or son

Getting locked in a chastity cage

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123about 3 years ago

"My Son Doesn't Like Sharing:" - In the next twenty-five (25) days it will have been three (3) years since 'NancDance' posted this fabulous, very unique mother and son incest themed story! It's been a long absence to not be able to read anything new from her; in my case it's been exceptionally "lonely" as this is the fifth (5th) time that I've read this masterpiece. A Note To The Writer: she's hit a home-run with this evolutionary epic; she has no concern that this story would not successful nor accepted by her readers! This story is a monster success by any measure!!! I'm off to reread her other treasures, and dream what if.....

xin8nixxin8nixabout 3 years ago

Nice story. I wish there is chapter 2 though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Will she ever be back to write a sequel to this??

mrdata9770mrdata9770almost 3 years ago

(7/12/2921)

I've been reading erotica for quite some time now and have commented openly on what I'm into and especially what I'm NOT into. If someone had told me 24 hours ago that I would be giving a 5-star rating to a story that included a woman being shared by her husband and their son I would have said they were out of their freaking minds. But hey, here it is. I hope you're happy Ms. NancDance your extreme writing talents have seduced me. I feel so dirty; I think I'm going to need to spend a few days under a shower, and then a few in the bathtub. I know sandblasting going to hurt quite a bit. bigdaddyg123 and I are of the same mind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You so need a Part 2.. of their time in Hawaii.. him ploughing her continuously ,they go home.. she gives mark and ultimatum.. accept it or divorce.. he divorces her, They have several babies, etc etc . Plz..wow..

Gym52Gym52almost 2 years ago

EXCELLENT,

An erotic and extremely erotic incestuous tale. Beautifully crafted and written. Further adventures of Travis and his mum would be most interesting especially how Mark reacted on their return home.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

She had better get a lawyer and start divorce proceedings; the reason being that Mark had forced her to have unprotected sex with her son, and she couldn't bear living with him anymore.

Incest babies ok in a story, but not IRL.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent story.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago

Great story but you really need a chapter two for the final outcum..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dang.. you can’t end it like this.. start CH 2 after Travis’ nap. And just have him fucking her incessantly for a few days. They go home and mark has to either accept this or he can divorce her.. she gets pregnant 3-4 times by Travis and them 2 end up moving away..

BiHubby68BiHubby68about 1 year ago

This was a very beautiful story.

walkindatdogwalkindatdog10 months ago

She had to have known she torched her marriage when she resorted to sending her hubby on ahead back home! The only recourse he has is to cut the malignancy that she is right out of his life! As more than one reader responded: cancel her credit cards, change the locks and dump her and her son's shit out on the driveway. If he chooses the other path, he might as well cut his balls off and hand them to her. She is not to be trusted- too bad their son is caught up in their drama. Collateral damage. If you extended the story by a page, all the above could be laid out. I would hope you can see that the story you wrote needs some resolving.

Also: you need an editor or maybe look back through what you write: far too many missing words or too many words, wrong words, past/ present tense mistakes. The story was plenty hot- you have the knack!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It's a crime to leave us hanging, please give us part two

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I agree. He has to dump her fast. If I were him I’d report her and what’s going on. Even if you aren't successful in stopping it, there will be a ton of questions. She would have eyes on her and she wants no part of the scrutiny based on the allegations. Also, word gets around fast. No, she has no clue how bad this can get for her. The husband can absolutely use the nuclear option. Would he be under the same scrutiny? Maybe a bit for allowing it to happen at first but he can always point out, I knew it was wrong and tried to stop it. She will destroy that kid.

BrendaNWBrendaNW2 months ago

Please continue .. your story is too good and too hot to stop now 🤗 😘💋

shadrachtshadracht27 days ago

Nothing erotic about betrayal of family. 1* and would love to see the aftermath when she comes home to find Mark disappeared and their house (and her stuff) burned to the ground l.

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg12312 days ago

"My Son Doesn't Like Sharing:" - This is the fifth time I've read this story, first reading in 2019 (today being 14 April 2024). Each time it has taken on quirky images and vibes...though better with each reading!

Surprisingly a good many readers have issues with the story context, ..., such as "ragging" on Mother Karen's cuckolding (though possibly short-term of several days) her husband by taking her son Travis totally into her lover/pregnancy-partner with deep, wanton convictions. She still has many years of her matronly fertile years to have several more children. After all, her husband that DID have his baby-making fuel denied for any future impregnating of his wife by having his "reversible" vasectomy!!

Writer/author 'NancDance' has to know--must know--that most all her fans agree that she's a fabulous, skilled and competent writer!! Although, there are less than half dozen (anonymous) readers that were somewhat unkind of her literary efforts!!!

I would like to thank fellow reader above, 'mrdata9770' for his appreciative words. I perused his list of favorites, noting him having many similar reading fetishes and subjects matter as I do.

LechemanLecheman7 days ago

Oh Wow, the critics are alive 'n' kickin' on this one!

Enjoyed the story and let's face it, the husband condoned it and then lost control.

One thing I've learned in life, is when a woman is on a mission, only a fool stands in her way!

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