All Comments on 'My Soon To Be-Ex Step-Daughter'

The narrator is such a schlub / poindexter, it's pitiful. Some bonding moments and instances of core mutual attraction in flashbacks were called for. Also it would be fantastic if callus, soon to be ex-wife gets paid back by seeing the two main characters together.

I HATE being so negative and apologize for that. I can get that way when an author has excellent idea and settles for mere stroke story instead of something special.Good luck with continuation.

Great start, really exciting. Can't wait to read the rest of the story!

after 19 years I do not think I could get pass the daughter thing. I know

under the law it is ok. I wonder why he never adopted her. this is only a

tale and not a maury tv show where it does happen. father and daughter

thing where everyone hates the father and calls him a pervert.

I am in the like it so far category. Every author has his or her style and I happen to like the direct approach. This story can go in a lot of directions and I look forward to seeing how many you take. I will admit that the whole revenge on the wife would seem wrong, just because she finally admits to her sexual preference, should not make her the baddy. But its your choice.

I like your stories because the women have nice small delicious breasts. I get tired of the unrealistic 50 DDDD stories. I appreciate you efforts to make reasonable characters with reasonable bodies. Keep up the good work.

Lordslamdawgg, where can we read some of your own work to set the benchmark?

Please continue

Are you a teenager? The comment about 'if a guy did that, he's totally a fag' is out of place. You should take it out.

More!

Nice story. I like it. AAAA++++