by Plato
I wonder how much your story is autobiographical. I live in Florida too, and, while I pass through there from time to time, I don't live in Orlando. You write well, and your character was believable, at least for me. I could see myself in his place. capshart@aol.com
You got me, these 2 stories are very personal and very cathartic. I felt like I was saying something I've needed to get off my chest. The sex was a little "dramatized" but the emotions were all true. Thank you!
I liked your story, but it was really short. It was over way too soon.