All Comments on 'My Special Afternoon Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
READABLE

I wonder how much your story is autobiographical. I live in Florida too, and, while I pass through there from time to time, I don't live in Orlando. You write well, and your character was believable, at least for me. I could see myself in his place. capshart@aol.com

PlatoPlatoover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you Floridian

You got me, these 2 stories are very personal and very cathartic. I felt like I was saying something I've needed to get off my chest. The sex was a little "dramatized" but the emotions were all true. Thank you!

Rwa4768Rwa4768almost 6 years ago
Short and sweet

I liked your story, but it was really short. It was over way too soon.

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