All Comments on 'My Special Delivery'

by sophia jane

Sort by:
  • 10 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
HOT

I've been waiting for quite some time for a UPS delivery man to get it good. Maybe I should share some real life UPS stories that you could write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Delicious

Very hot and extremely delicious. The sly inuendo at the beginning was very enticing. I was smiling from the moment she put on the kimono. I would have like to seen use of the toy. Perhaps next time there could be more use out of the next order. Very yummy.

angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Very arousing!

Brilliantly told tale! I will continue to read your work, Bravo! ~Minx

msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
Another Arosal

You are two for two. Lovely story, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
yumm!

great story SJ ... I need to get on my deliveryman uniform and come right over! Well done, cant wait to read more, more!

centauri4centauri4about 19 years ago
Made me want to handle my package!

Sophia,

Well done! All the right elements in the perfect order. So build up, tension, uncertainty and then abandonment. Wow! Nice! When are you going to write more? ~ Centauri4

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Mmmmmmmm Good

SJ your stories are very arousing, feels like I'm sitting there, waiting for my turn for you to help me with my package.

Scorpio44Scorpio44about 19 years ago
Wow!!

I will remember this story whenever I see one of those big brown trucks parked near a home! Nicely done!

supahstoopidsupahstoopidabout 19 years ago
Great albeit brief

Certainly a positive response from my..er...anyway, I love what's there. Possibly it's just my own perverted self, but I would have liked you to have protracted them fucking together. What I really liked was the sense of sexual self-confidence in the main character (I love the 'toy' comment after he came in her mouth). Well done!

Gus AsparGus Asparover 18 years ago
great delivery

Wonderful delivery! (And I've got a package for you, too.)

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous