All Comments on 'My Special St. Valentine’s Day'

I have generously given you two stars. I'm sorry but all I can say about this story is that the writing is extremely clumsy. It became quite boring reading the repetitive descriptions of Lisa Ann's body (at the start of the story, you gave a full description twice in three paragraphs). And over and over again you tell us your breast size, and over and over again you tell us that the dildo is 13" long. Don't you think your readers would have got the point after just one mention of each? A very good principle to keep in mind is that less is often more. If you really want to write, then you've got a long way to go if this story is a typical example of your work.