All Comments on 'My Step-Sister the Cam Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sequel Please

Would like to here more about this step-brother and step-sister and their incestuous ways.

papabeardougpapabeardougover 8 years ago
Great start

great start but would like more back story in anything following

lemonheadslemonheadsover 8 years ago

very good start, needs to be continued with several more chapters. Very good job

Geon54Geon54over 8 years ago
Promising

"....polishing my parental pods..." lol. very nice

mitchawamitchawaover 8 years ago
Plot

An interesting, innovative plot

which concluded on the spot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
4

I a-love alliteration! Encore!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
ehh

entertaining but the alliteration is cheesy

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great story

kaidmankaidmanabout 8 years ago
dynamite

good story but I feel it was unfinished please continue this one

auhunter04auhunter04about 8 years ago

she get paid?

did she share?

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