by MaryAnderson
I agree with the other comments that proclaim the excellence of this piece! There is only one other who could have compared to your writing in this piece and he fell off the face of the Earth years ago. You have written the very BEST story I have read on this site, EVER!
I'm going to list you as my Favorite THEN I'll go in search of others you've written.
Take a bow!
X-Man
I'm looking forward to reading more about Steven and selena...also how does dad react when he finds out?
Excellent story. A few oops that need fixed, but a fun read. Good corrector definition, a good flow, and story line. Thanks, looking forward to reading more.
Would like to see more chapters. What happens with Sarah ? What happens when Renee returns ? Will he invite his mother up to show off his slave Serena and let his mother have a little revenge ?
But there is So much to Follow-up on. Like Sarah he should bring her in and Take control of her just like Step-Mommy. Then there's Renee she could come and use Step-Mommy or Sarah. Plus Bobby deserves some Gratification.
More of the same please, keep it simple dont add other sub stories/plots that take your story off course like most other writers do
Without a doubt, one of the hottest fucking domination stories I've ever read.
What about his innocent mom ? ? ? What kind of loveless prick is he to just drop her ????
Is this guy seeking revenge on behalf of his mother? Does he hate his father? This isn't a tale of lust between a young college guy and his slightly 'older than him' step-mother. This is complete debasement of the step-mom.
So he hates his father and her, and perhaps even himself. Also doesn't seem to grasp that "the child... *were* already growing..." is blatantly wrong.
(5/7/2023) OH, Hell YES!!! Very well done. I hope there's a sequel to this story. It's been eight years. Does Sarah get initiated into his harem? Does Renee stick around? And did she seduce hubby after picking him up at the airport? I hope not. Five stars and on my list.