All Comments on 'My Story of Ben Ch. 02'

Excellent, keep writing stories like this.

Thanks for Ben's chest hair -- I've always found some chest hair on a guy very sexy and appealing -- especially on an older man who is more "experienced" in sex. Ben seems a fine specimen of manhood, ever eager to please the partner. Long may they love!

Wow! You definitely stoked the erotic flames in this chapter. 😆 As well as setting the stage for future conversations to determine their future. Excellent job not sure how it could have been any better!

Awesome job! Please continue your writing. You do great!

Is this Fifty Shades fan fiction? I'm just asking because there are some similarities, although yours is a million times better written. I would love to mention that either way, I love the stories and can't wait to hear more. As someone with an undying attraction to older men, these stories appealed to me anyway and then the sex is hot but also beautifully written. Please keep going :)

This fine writer raises the stakes in as hot a second chapter as you will find *****, but should be ************!

I can't wait for more in this series. Imaginative, sensual, interesting people. Great work.

You are an exquisite writer. Nothing more to say!

This is on the whole an excellent sequel to chapter one of this story, but it is really a romance, and belongs in the Romance category. The whole atmosphere of the chapter is one of love, passion, and tenderness, which is why the use of the f word by the characters has a jarring effect at times. The love scenes are well written, but far too short and too infrequent. However, on the whole, raincitychild is a fine and talented author, and gives the reader an excellent story.