All Comments on 'My Submission to a Real Man'

by gbr2004

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great!

Great as always

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Outstanding

Had the fortuitous opportunity to stumble across this collection of stories. Found each and every one a wonderful example of this particular genre. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Hopefully constructive critisims

My two biggest problems with this story were the changing perspectives and what I felt to be the over use of "faggot" and "fag". I have no qualms with using them but it felt like they were just meaningless placeholder words after a while. Those combined with the jarring swaps between the "you/I" and "he/I" pronoun parings made it hard to stay hard, at least for me. Other than those two things this was really solid and I know my master is going to enjoy reenacting some of the scenes. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good but needs editing

This story is fairly hot, but there's a bunch of editing issues. When exactly did he get put in a chastity cage? One minute he's stroking his clit, the next hard plastic is containing him, then he's allowed to stroke his clit again at the end

stories55stories55over 6 years ago
great story

Want to hear more! Are you going back tomorrow to the street corner? Does Mike comeback to help with your training? Maybe he teaches you to give a lap dance for your master till he cums on your ass. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Oh my You lucky girl

Please continue You have captured my desires it has been so long since I had a man and never one so strong as he is. 4yourpleasureiam Please some one PM me

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great start

Very good start i definitely would like to read more like the next night he's to do the street corner and maybe made to do as master wants in front of a bunch of lady's and men !

keptsissykeptsissyabout 5 years ago
done much of what you write

I have done much of what you write about in this story, with several long-term boyfriends. The reality is just as hot as the fantasy. And reliving it, KNOWING you are what you are for your boyfriend, after he leaves you, during masturbation, KNOWING he'll be back and do whatever he wants with you--there is nothing hotter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What we sissy gurl's desire more than anything

I think the author is on the right track for describing the situation that we submissive sissies fantasie about. The first time we are dominated starts a fire that is visible in the sissy in the story. The important question about this is how does the author know how much we have to be able to be a sexual servant who has no choice but to make a man happy by doing anything, anytime, anywhere, and with anyone. The way the story shows how much the humiliation excites the submissive is so real just not as much as the dominance, but it also makes the best kind of relationship. I don't think I would be able to stay in the relationship without a lot of humiliation and we would be lying if we said that we didn't fantasize about being forced to be a part time hooker. I think the most interesting part is the way the sissy progresses and the more she/he is pushed the more submissive sissy is. the desire for pleasure becomes secondary to the nasty things you have to do with anyone who your master or mistress wants you to do and then you can not ever get aroused without having a dominant personality or being bold to do something

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please Master

I wish I could get some big dicked bastard to treat me like this.

tamis_demisetamis_demiseover 3 years ago

I just love all of your stories, can never get enough of them. Always desire to be the main character

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