All Comments on 'My Succubus Lover'

I love nonhuman stories, and the only human characters I like writing about are from video games. 5 stars for the nonhuman content and the sex.

But you need a native English speaker to proof-read for grammar.

Bad translators and spellcheckers diminish this greatly.

I can respect this as a work of fiction, however I am concerned about your mental health if this wasn't intended as such.