All Comments on 'My Summer Cougar Pt. 02'

You need to go back

and check the action and make sure it doe not jump back a step or two on what has happened before.

Look for errors likely introduced buy some spell checker also

Yes Anonymous, do check the action for errors.

and check the action and make sure it doe not jump back a step or two on what has happened before.

Look for errors likely introduced buy some spell checker also

Although brief they are very enjoyable. I am sure I speak for many in saying we enjoy the story so far, don't take huge breaks between chapters.