All Comments on 'My Sweet Little Angel Ch. 01'

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Anonymousabout 11 years ago

Great story

LOVE IT ! Can`t wait for the continuation !

ariesgirl about 11 years ago

Please don't let it be her ex.

wrecktech about 11 years ago

Of course it's the ex...

What or who else could it be? Excellent story! Is Fiona going to end up calling Nick "Shrek" at some point?

roller_girl06 about 11 years ago

Loving this....

I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the continuation!!!! Great story!

hotmama20092011 about 11 years ago

More!

Please hurry with the next chapter!

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

please continue writing! i bet the person on the phone is her ex. i love this story so far.

Anonymousabout 2 years ago

Nope. They spent a few hours together at a wedding. Knowing he was moving to NY, she never called him. Now she’s asking why he left her alone. It says she already knew he was a great cook. Why does she think he left her? How does she know things about him, unless her friend talked about him? Too much left unexplained for me.

Anonymous9 months ago

Her ex needs his nuts cut off and feed to him

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...

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