All Comments on 'My Sweet Little Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Please write more

MitchFraellMitchFraellalmost 10 years ago
Sweet

The way we were.

doug_noughtdoug_noughtalmost 10 years ago
Mal and Tom?

Hope this is another chapter between Mal and Tom :)

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
The games people play

A frolicking good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Short sweet and nice

See above. Is this part of Mal and Tom story?

George in Omaha

thepiratequeenthepiratequeenover 9 years agoAuthor
This isn't Mal and Tom

Mal and Tom were not the people I was thinking about when I wrote the story, but feel free to imagine it's them anyhow. Most of my stuff has same the voice and syntax, so it all pretty much reads the same. I've been trying to branch out, but it sounds like I'm still a literary one trick pony for now. As always though, feedback and comments are extremely welcome.

Thanks for reading!

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 9 years ago
Nice.

Nice sweet story, enjoyable read.

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Hmm. How do I describe me....Well, I'm after experiences that make me smile. Whether it's something I've written or a chat room conversation I try my best to walk away with a all those lovely, bubbly feelings. I think that too often there's a dark, mellow dramatic overtone wit...