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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice story.

Sure would have been nice if it were 2-3 chapters longer.

SirBigfootSirBigfootover 8 years ago
good story.

but you rushed the ending. Could have been great if you had made more chapters or a longer tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You stated it was 1970, then made a few more mentions of it being "in those days" then the girl josh picked up talked about them exchanging texts. Texting in the 70's?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice story

FYI, in 1970 the drinking age in NY was 18, it did not change to 21 until the 1980s.

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Scientist and avid reader. I like to write dark stories with a strong plot. I also like legs and athletic asses. I like breasts of all sizes and shapes, so I use terms like ample and generous to describe my female characters. I leave it to my readers to use their imaginations....