All Comments on 'My TBI becomes Total Brain Instruct Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
details are important

there's no way a 19 year old can be a Captain in the USMC or any other branch of the US Armed Forces.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I like it

I dont care if a 19yr old can be a captain or not, I am loving this story. Keep the chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sara the medic is 19 not Samantha the Captain

Reread the story---the medic named Sara is 19. The Captain's age isn't ever given....

blackrosepedals2blackrosepedals2over 13 years ago
:(

i absolutely love these stories. plz continue?

rjw69877rjw69877over 10 years ago

I meant to give it a 5 star but wasn't paying close enough attention and hit 4 by mistake. Excellent story.

jott50jott50about 9 years ago
i am so sorry

that i only could give you 5*. this short series was incredibly hot.

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