by touchmate
That was super fantastic. so beautifully written. so real. keep it up. do keep writing more
Hi, Thanks for the nice comments - public and private. I am glad that you liked the story and my writing :) It is such nice feedback that keeps me writing! May be I would write a chapter-2 now! Thanks again,guys!
Touchmate
Hi! Very real. Excellent descriptions. Enjoyed thoroughly. Pl keep writing.
Beautiful narration and flow. Rather than a pure lust story this is a love story culminating in sex.
Very Good Work.
Very nice and detailed narrative of charterers, action, environment and emotions. Looking forward to your reaction and comments on my stories.
Es el terifico!. a Fantastic job! Waiting to see more such gems.
One of the best stories I have read so far on this site. Superbly erotic and realistic too.
I enjoyed your story, just one small thing birth control pills are not effective after only one dose so the chance of her getting pregnant is still there.
Wow.... Such a smooth flow..... Beautiful... Can be picturised so comfortably while reading this...
Yes, to the kamala madame that each one of us wld hav had....
Cheers
Pls do keep writing... U r awesome