All Comments on 'My Teacher, My Prey'

Very good first story, slightly short but otherwise very good. Keep it up!

Your grammer and word usage could be better, otherwise OK

Good first attempt. You limited yourself a bit by making your heroine a bit one dimensional .ie a silly oversexed airhead with no complexity to her character.However I thought the grammar(grammer?) was quite good. You will get better with practice

Very hot. I wish I were the teacher. I'd have you wear black seamed nylons, a garter belt, a silk blouse and pleated mini skirt to class. 4" heels to finish the outfit would bring the teacher to tears

great every girls fantasy!!!!!!!!

It was a little short and could have had more details but i loved it and it made me cum everywhere.

Great !!! Please continue

well if this is your first time let it not be your last ...

Good job, keep writing, I got off easy from it.

Drove 3,000 miles in 10 hours? I've driven across the USA and it is more than 10 hours. Let's speak in days. Also you seemed to have trouble spelling 'you' as it appears you were texting by only using 'u' and more than once. Story moved too fast and it would need to be rewritten to make it believable, if at all possible. Other than those comments, it was okay.