by Lara_Longstaff
A sexy well written story, well done Lara
Kept me hard and wishing I had a neighbor like that xx
One of the great things about this site is finding one author you like congratulating another author you like. Thank you for your writing Lara.
Just want to thank you for writing such great stories, with not only very in-depth and well written sex but also a wo derfully written plot that gets your readers hooked. Nevermind the negative comments and just know your appreaciated by many for your work.
I realize I'm echoing the sentiments of the other commenters, but I love your work, Lara. And I came harder than I can remember doing in recent memory imagining myself in his place and landing myself the transwoman of my dreams. If you ever happen across a real-life Caroline, please, please, please, send her my way!
story I have read written by you. I intend to go see what else you have written.
Thanks for sharing. 😃
I enjoy most of your works, but could have done without the political side comments. I read this stuff to escape from reality, not to imagine those petulant social justice warriors.
Love how they found their natural places with her on top and him on the bottom. Just wish there was another 5 pages of him taking it up the ass from this powerful sexy top.
Thanks for writing such a hot story that actually features fully realized characters. You do a great job of treating the trans women in your stories as real people and not just fetish objects. And any person who jerks off to trans porn and then doesn't support trans rights is a real hypocritical asshole.
until it come to the virtue signaling and then i just had to quit it. It's a shame too because I was enjoying the direction of the story and admiring the style of writing.
Loved this one Lara... I was daydreaming that it was written about me since my name is also Mike.
i am always looking forward to your amazing stories. and you did it again here ,thank you for time , effort to write this story.
Truly great.
OK, 2 words. No, 5. Wait... darn
It was just a damn good read. There, but for bad luck and chance, go I.
Lara that crazy insanely intensely HOT!!! I'm sore. My pussy is sore, I went to and fucked myself silly riding my nephews long thick pole till he pumped full of incestuous seed. Then went at it again. Good Golly I was like a bitch in heat. You hit my favorite Authors List. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Did I mention how HOT this was?
Like Blast furnace at full bore HOT!!!
Chrissie
TBC
As per subject. You'd better stick to the stories.
Thank you so very much Lara for writing and sharing such a wonderful story. Will begin reading your others tomorrow.
You hit all the right hot button issues: Trans women can like to top; states should stay out of the bathroom--and so should perverts; religious intolerance--is that really your God; and work place romances. On the spot, right through the to "the very end!" Excellent work! XOX KristyT
Great story and real "feeling" characters - addresses very real TG issues and issues with loving TG without preaching
And thanks for making it real and realistic: real because fiction imitates life and vice versa; realistic because intimacy does produce or reflect deep, emotional feelings. Additionally, fiction can -- and often does -- speak to real life issues.
and political issues through fiction. Not sure why, I imagine it has to do with putting the issue in a more framework more related to the reader.
How do you do it? I mean, how do you combine real-life issues, honest emotion and scalding-hot sex and make it turn out this incredible? (Words fail me, they really do, I only said "incredible" because I don't think the right word's been invented yet.)
AMAZING Such a heart felt story and hope more people read and understand that trans are people also and that it is what is inside that you fall in love with.
I've lost count how many times I've reread this one - my favourite of your stories, and possibly my favourite that I've ever read!
I'm a fan of these stories, please put them back on the website.
Well told, sexy, and sweet. Makes me want a lovely transgender lady in my life, thank you for a delicious dream.
Very well done. I loved the interaction. It was good he could see the right path for him. There likely is someone for Julie. Or, you might write a story about her becoming better educated in life.
Superb writing
I can't wait to read more of you work. This story is sexy, romantic, and even beleivable, I love it. And I for one really appreciated every bit of it, how messy and imperfect Laura and mikes relationship started out and the stuff about the protest, I'm glad you didnt leave that out and hope other people's comments don't make you hold anything back in the future. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. :)
Amazing story with phenomenal writing... Just like Mike, I want more!
I loved it even more then the first time. I love how you involved real life problems, rather then just making it a typical sex story but, when it came down to the sex, it was still so damn hot. I know this story is a little old but, it's definitely just as good as I remember it...if not, even better.
This story reminds me of when I was first topped by a trans woman. She was 2" longer than me and much thicker. The description of him first being penetrated reminded me so much of my first pounding. So good and like him, I was hooked on being topped ever since.
If any straight guys are reading this maybe it will open their minds and think that TG
are people too and not to be condescended to.
Thank you for a good read and keep up the good work.
Five stars is way to little for a great story told with feeling AND an OPEN MIND.
1. It could have used an editor. A few misspellings, dropped words, etc.
2. I don't subscribe to the whole top/bottom dynamic, but that's a personal choice. I find it too limiting.
3. Perfect message.
4. Fantastic story.
I loved this. Sure, it borrows from some cliches; the obligatory uber-hung trans woman who's into topping, mainly. Still, you did at least touch on some of the narratives surrounding trans women's genital dysphoria and the myriad catch 22's regarding dating and sex while trans.
All said; it's a unique story which combines titilation and thought provocation rather well.
I love how real this is, just how crazy sex happens in life!
Awesome & sexy as fuk!
Id love to meet up with some one, not as a straight guy meeting a trans for sex only ,
But with a chance of a relationship,like happened in this story
I am curious and hope its not too late ,I'm in my sixtys.
Hot sexy story,more than 5 stars......
This is one of the best stories in this genre I have ever read. Full stop.
The sex was steamy for sure but I really appreciated the way that you gave your characters real (and complex) emotions — feelings and issues they had to work out in order to have their HEA.
Bravo!
Sensational gripping story and so believable. I hope there is more of this or similar, best way to spend lockdown.
That was an all around incredible story. I enjoyed every word and every emotion it allowed me to relate to. You are a damn fine author who can weave a wonderful story.
Thank you bringing it to life. A real honor to read and enjoy.
Just briiliant.
Would have loved to eet a transgender, not jst as a fantasie, but really to hae a realationship with her
If this story is true, then you are a very lucky man.
Excellent story... As a Post-op Poly/Pan/Switchy Trans-woman... I found my self absorbed in, and enjoying the story line.... I found myself identifying with both Michael, as well as Caroline. I could easily see both sides of the dilemmas.. and of course? I was always rooting in Caroline's favour.....
As soon as you wrote that the church bus pulled up at the demonstration, I knew that Julie was going to be there counter demonstrating. Just too funny!
You are the only author I've read that has not described the taste of the lovers cum and 'sweet'. Unless there's some secret I'm not being told, I've always found it a little salty, not sweet. I guess 'sweet' is more romantic than salty and gagging.
As a cross dresser, I once marched in a Gay Pride parade where I live. It was fun but it also kind of scary not knowing if something bad was going to happen. Luckily nothing bad happen and we all had a good time with a great turnout.
Thanks for a very interesting story with a great story line.
I like how your characters are not 2-dimensional. Really enjoyed the story!
Thank you for an awesome story!! I'm a Black Transwoman and I just loved this one.
I usually don't comment on stories, but yours was very loving and inspiring. Keep up the great work and you now have a very loyal fan!!
Great story again. I can't believe I enjoyed reading about a guy being on the receiving end from his perspective. I especially liked that they got to know each other in jeans and tshirts while drinking beer and eating pizza, etc. rather than the usual description of the transexual temptress. I wish I had such an experience in my younger days. Please keep the stories coming, no pun intended.
Story was very interesting. It was insightful, funny, and just plain hot and sexy! Very well written. I really could picture the characters and felt their emotions. Definitely out of my normal "comfort zone", it had me hard the entire time. Thanks for sharing!
As a trans woman, this started out like something I might like, especially because it seemed like Caroline represented me, a tall for trans woman who loves to please her man, but it devolved into something that made me feel gross, and frankly I think it highlights why I avoid chasers. "on top" typically refers to receiving by the way, "topping" is when you're giving the meat, why I started off good.
I think if you didn't make her girldick comically big and treated her like a woman it wouldn't have been so bad. And if Mike was a more realistic straight guy (non-fetishists usually just avoid bringing up my pens bc it causes dysmoprhia) who didn't obsess over being fucked with a huge dick, I think this could've been a really hot and sweet story. Plus, transitioning often means you lose size down there and stop producing semen.
For guys reading: this is an impossible scenario I feel, and if you want a trans gf, emphasise her femininity, don't caricaturize her genitals and identity.
Really enjoyed the story! Wish I could enjoy a relationship like this. Yes I know a transwoman stops producing cum on this level.
Great story!
Really enjoyed the story and it’s I wish I could enjoy a relationship like theirs. Love conquers all.
Thanks for sharing!!!
When reading this I was just blown away (no pun intended) by how Caroline was so forward with Mike and made it perfectly clear she was attracted to him majorly.Julie on the other hand turned out to be the Evil Villainous Bitch who showed her true colors and wound up losing Mike due to her bigotry.
For Mike and Caroline basically role reversing and having Caroline fuck Mike regularly was awesome and probably made the whole plot better.Also the reference that Mike and Caroline eventually got married and talk of adopting kids made this almost perfect,I would have liked if they had adopted some young trans kids who wanted to be like Mommy and Daddy,but oh well.
Referring to the part where Mike questions if he is gay or not I was thinking Hell No,just because someone has a cock and you suck and get fucked by it doesn't mean your gay,especially if she is effeminant and looks and sounds like a girl.She is just a girl with a cock,also to clarify like Caroline may not have a true pussy doesn't mean she can't use her ass as one,and I'm sure in her and many trans womens cases there ass pussies feel just as good as true pussies do when getting fucked.
Lastly it seems like in real life Trans Women are giving Genetic Women a bad rep,because from what I see trans women are more compassionate and caring and seem to want to please their partners.
marvelous story
when reading this I thought it was amazing, the fact Caroline didnt hide who she was, the fact Mike didnt really know at first was really good. I have seen some trans-women you could never tell, I have seen some bio-women you would think they were trans. So mike not really knowing till he saw the bulge is not that far off.
I love how you took sweet innocent religious Julie show her true hateful ugliness, to bad she does represent so many religious people.
I think most people understand the fantasy part of these stories, they know no all the TS women dont have 9 inch long and 5 inch circumference and able to get hard 10 seconds after shooting a gallon of cum 15 times a day. Hell most men wish they could do that.
I loved how romantic and caring the story was, How Mike loved Caroline so much he wanted to fulfill her need to top again. I was hoping they would still play the lube tube game, meaning they both were switchers (both top and bottom).
wonderful story
thank you
Best Literotica story I have ever read. Intelligent without rambling, erotic, real.
I loved this story so, so much.
I’ll never forget the first time I was fucked ... it was definitely the best sex I have ever had. Full body orgasm, couldn’t even stop quivering for about 20 minutes afterwards!
Not my usual genre, and I am certainly not a literary critic, but it was a good story that was well written (I had to see how it ended) with a nice twist in the plot.
Hot as hell! The hung dom trans woman and slutty bottom guy is a common theme, but you wrote it so well! Wish i was him. Thanks for writing this story.
Heart warming. I know someone who sounds a lot like Julie. I don't know why she doesn't just abandon me and have her "pure" group of friends.
Hope, Faith and Love. The strongest of which is Love.
I've never met a woman with a penis, not that I haven't' wanted to. Some of my gf's have willingly used a strapon with me, but have always wondered what a stiff, warm, real cock would feel like in my butt. I'm sure it would feel better than a cold plastic fake penis. Thing is, having sex with a man is not my style at all. I love everything about pussy. Going to a alternative bar or night club and bringing someone home isn't an option either. Anyway, maybe some day I'll meet someone "next door" and be surprised to find a cock and my fantasies will become reality.
This is so hot. I love that she a little dominant but not abusive. Very well written! Thanks!
Great story ... One of the most beautiful and heart felt one ... It gives ours more understand of everyone ..
Man would have loved for it to end with them being in an equal kinda of relationship I mean if u end up getting addicted as a guy to getting fuck dat relationship pretty much turns gay cuz why did she get the breasts in the first place cus she wants to be a woman so den why us she suddenly into topping the guy in the relationship dat my friend fucks up d whole dynamic I feel trans relationships shud be give or take not one side dominating d whole thing
Super hot thanks for sharing once you get fucked good there is no going back . I am very happy for you
When I hit page 5 my boner was throbbing. The sex details were wonderful, as was the sensitivity andhonesty shown to Caroline. Some criticized the identity politics, but they are a predictable part of our world today and I liked it. I read one previous story and enjoyed it immensely and look forward to more! Keep them cumming!
I once dated a transgender, the problem was she was emotionally unstable and tried gaslighting me, i also didn't like most of her friends. I guess some people hvae more luck
Great story! I personally enjoy more petite Asian ladies....but this story was hot! I would love to find a lady like this that enjoys topping\vers!
Very good. I feel the same as you both. I love all people that are beautiful inside.
Love is beautiful, Hetero, Trans, Gay or Lesbian. It's the Emotion and deep feeling that matter.
Nicely done i love the dominant trans woman trope, even if its a bit unrealistic, most trans women wouldnt have horse sized cocks or want to be very dominant or toppy, but who cares' its fantasy fic.. It was a great read and pushed my buttons. Iseldom get hard from erotic fiction, im older and a bit jaded, but this is bonafide wank material, and also romantic, which makes it all the better. Thanks for writing!
OK anonymous I have to disagree with you on this one thing, Yes it is possible for a trans woman to be hung like in the story. A trans woman I met in 2017 when I wound up homeless and in the local VA village (she was also a Vet and homeless) and we became good friends. For over 4 years she would come over to my apt weekly for dinner and a movie. No sex just friends. Then about 6 months ago she disappeared. About 3 months ago summer showed up at my door. She was homeless again. I was sitting on the couch just talking with her offering support when she looked at me and said “Do you want to touch it”? Of course I said YES!
So she undid the string of her sweatsuit and we together pull them down. Once I saw her girly cock I was VERY surprised it was at least 9 hard inches maybe 10. Needless to say I had wanted that from the time I met her. So I started to sucker her. Could only get half in my mouth but I was enjoying trying to take more. I did ask her if she wanted to try and fuck me (been years since I had done it) but she told me she was a total bottom. I spent the next week trying to give her a bj and make her cum. She told me she takes at least 2 hours to cum. Sorry for being so long winded, but my point is trans girls can be as the old saying. Goes,
“HUNG LIKE A HORSE”
Lovely story. Very happy for them. I'm getting impatient to completely transition into my womanhood. Find some good lovers finally!? 💋
I loved this story and love the way you write. too bad there are not very many Trans women here. Maybe someday I will find one.
Dispite the missing words, the double used words and a few misplaced punctuation marks.
This was a fun read !
( You really need a good editor. ) Tho I might also !
Being a non-op trans myself, I was very caught up in this one.
I had to giggle as well as laugh a few times reading descriptions of Caroline's massive size as well as Mike's ability to deep throat the monster so quickly.
( Belive me, it just does not happen that quickly )
Also, the speed at which Mike was able to enjoy anal penetration by an unearthly, oversized, asshole destroyer.
I know the writing is fantasy fiction, but speaking from experience, i also know what it takes to become acceptable of something in the ginormous family.
Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story.
The way you presented Caroline's personality, I expect you may know a few "Gurls" who live this lifestyle.
I knew this gurl quickly in just a few words.
Unfortunately, I also recognized the "church going" demon from her and Mikes goodbyes after their first date.
Being able to connect so well with one of the characters within the story, really put me on the path to exhilarating pleasure in reading this story !
Nice work young lady !
Very Romantique und sweet!
I like the fact that you made Mike a 'regular' guy not some simpering loser blatantly Femboi male and that Caroline wasn't an overpowering domineering 'dude with tits', but more nuanced than that trope which permeates most of the Trans stories here on Lit.
11/10 Bottles of Lube!!!!!
descriptive on the sexual side to make it erotic but also a well structured story line. Very enjoyable.
Loved how you tied the ending up. Most stories I've read this long don't bother doing so. Also how both of them faced their insecurities together and became stronger.
Brilliant story with a great ending. Puts the case for a better accepting of all types and needs of people. Not just certain ones that you like