All Comments on 'My Trophy Wife Linda [GB-09] Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This is a horrible story-

WRITERS of stories often reveal a lot about their mind-state in their "tales." This one sure does. Controlling, brutal, rape minded&VERY ILLITERATE. No advice from me to use an editor. Instead I implore them to GET HELP-they have a Very DANGEROUS mind set. Too many would be Violent Wackos walking the streets. Don't write here anymore please. Seek help. Icky stuff above. Fiction, yes. From a Dangerous mind. Get Help Soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not Bad

In reference to the comment above"Horrible Story". I didn't find this story horrible but rather a typical wife gang bang story. These stories are sexual fantasies so if you are a prude you have no business in this category and should stay with the romance/couple category. Stop trying to shame someone for their writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

I loved it. She was clearly willing. It showed the differences between the men. I loved reading it from the husband's pov. Very hot. Nothing to criticize. As a female, I wanted to read even more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A great story

A well written an enjoyable story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great. I love gangbang/multiple_penetration stories. Having everyone willing is even better. It is well written and detailed enough to call up very graphic imagery. Please write more of this storyline. Thank you. DWH

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