All Comments on 'My Twin Sister is a Cheerleader'

...........fun start

Well written, good begginning, almost a justifiable set of conditions put forward by the victim. Nice touch with the sister twin declaring sweater off for the "non-participating" student. I look forward to the continuing saga ! Thank you.

Great start to what I hopes will be a great story.. Keep up the good work

Love the start please write the rest

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As a shy guy even my tongue was hard! :)/

This story really is fun to read, please continue this storyline.

Let them hash out the issues, and only then have a good time with no coercion on anyone's part.

Nice job of writing and describing the action. Almost seems believable.

Hope this story takes several chapters before it reaches the end.

Looking forward to what happens next.

Keep up the excellent writing.

Which is it?

This is a very good story that I am enjoying a lot. My only complaints so far are the overuse of the word "nubile" which is possibly the most creepy word in the English language and also how fast the main character has changed. He went from being super shy to confident and somewhat arrogant in the space of minutes. I would have ideally liked to of seen that stretched out a lot more as it feels like a bit of a cheat the way you did it.

Still in saying all that so far this is a very good story.

This is by far the best story of the whole of literotica.

It should be made into a real porn movie!

Say nubile again, I dare you, go ahead, make my day!

Though otherwise a good story, just please, tone it down on the nubile, there are other words to use.

It is cherry harvest time again for a few weeks. This is not something we have been able to enjoy for several years. festivals abound. so do the teenagers taking advantage of the rites of passage being performed for a first time. sometimes the rites are blissfully renewed. and then sometimes a cad will slip away because he has not yet taken this ride . Orlon.

there is such a fine line between hazing and school heritage.

or when a particularly (potentially) harmful situation is encountered by the cheerleaders.

the casual meetings began harmless enough but as the day progressed so did the demands for more liberties to be taken by the upper classmen (ladies)? during particularly insightful sessions in which I certainly did learn many valuable lessons. and not just the bare basics of stamen stimulation during pollen transfer.

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I would love to experience this

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At some point in the story it looked like they called him Jason instead of Jimmy.

Rape is rape is rape & those girls raped him. He has every right to be furious, but has come up with a solution that works. Keep writing!!!

This is a pretty creepy view of male-female relations. Tit-for-tat (sorry), and either dominating or dominated.

Great to see Ginny standing up for her shy brother. Makes a very welcome change from most other stories where the hot sister is the instigator that goes out of her way to humiliate her shy brother.

My only quibble is that Jimmy/Jason seems to have transformed from a super shy guy, that can't even speak to people, to a super confident and agressive guy in a shorter time than it took me to write this! That kind of shyness doesn't just vanish at the drop of a hat, no matter what is going on around you. Trust me, I wish it could, but in reality, he would have sprinted from that room, not looking back, and would have spent the rest of the night throwing up from shame and humiliation.

Great story. Man, I wish I was Jimmy!

Why is he upset that the whole hot cheerleadering team gave him a blowjob and one rubbed her boobs on his arm. Its also stupid that he didnt want to se the routine

he should of fucked them get them to suck cock.