All Comments on 'My Vacation'

by 34DDasian

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
more please

It was amazing...i need more!!!

Azrael556Azrael556about 10 years ago
This took long enough to post....

but it was worth it to see your work online. I hope you have more planned.

OldeSarge1OldeSarge1about 10 years ago
Great first submission.

I look forward to more in the future and seeing how your style developes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Decent story but need to proof read a bit more. At one point you stated that she had never met him and then later you stated that he was more attractive than she remembered. Overall a very nice story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
i want more

I loved this story. I want someone to fuck me like that i am looking to see more stories from you great job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Mmmm

Short and sweet but left me wet for mmmmore

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Looking forward to a continuation of this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mmm

Reminds me of my mom's boyfriend, and when he took my virginity when I was younger.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Super hot

Damn hot! Wish to read more parts on their adventourous wild sex winter break..

One scene would be better if they sleep with his cock inside her the whole night..damn dripping

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