All Comments on 'My Very Best Vacation'

Other than a few grammar errors this story is perfect.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

first, i'd just like ti say that your story is epic, keep up the good writing.

secondly,i liked the story within a story. storyception!

thirdly,just a minor point,your spelling and grammar needs a lot of work.

Keep up the great writing. Thanks

... with Larry74403!

I enjoyed it a great deal. The tender love always completes a story for me.

Thank you!

HOLY SHIT THAT ENDING

Wonderful writing, wonderful story, wonderful romance, wonderful sex - everything was perfect! Please write a follow-up!

the whole G story was boring and had nothing to do with incest and didn't add any thing to the story or help further the plot. you wasted a whole page on a substory that should have been a paragraph at best.

Good story. I don't think her rationale for not moving with him to another state holds water though. They are adults, their parents have no right to be hurt about their children wanting to not live so near them.

Loved it