All Comments on 'My VideoChat Error Ch 17'

Too light on the details and build-up, and too heavy on "who is Naughty?"... Hope we'll see Shauna dating her b/f sooner rather than later...

OMG almost came at the reveal at the end! Please don't make us wait for months for the next chapter!!!

it's getting complicated , deliciously complicated.

can't wait for the next chapter , please don't make us wait for another 3 months .

five stars for this chapter , keep it up

Another decent addition to series.

Would like a bit more detail on the fun and a bit more humiliation.

Also how about a sub story about Mitch. It sounds like he’s had a much tougher time of it and had a lot more of a fight and humiliation! Would love to read that

Great story. Can’t wait to read more

Excellent story. Well-written and great character development. I read all your chapters in one go. I have high hopes when Naughty is finally revealed. Keep the humiliation going for poor ol Shauna!

keep it , and them, coming!

I feel sick to my stomach for Shaun, and Emma, but I can't stop reading. It all ties together though, the parent company of both Shaun's and Emma's companies is holding the party. Is Rachel working for him now? is that the connection to the video chat error? And did Emma make some mistake or indiscretion and is now being enslaved?

Dammit, no chance now for a Happily Ever After. None at all. Not much chance for Shaun to ever, ever, get out. If it was me I'd ask Emma if she wanted a suicide pact or just me to off myself.

There is no hope.

But I gotta read to the end.

I have been waiting for Emma to enter the story, but this is the better than I imagined. My own wife cuckolds me and has for years. But she doesn’t know about my cross dressing. It’s my dream to encounter her this way ... she with a cum-crusted pussy and me dolled up in lingerie while sucking a cock. This story really hits home. Love it, love it, love it.

Spankmehard 51

I can't find anything else on LIT that is quite like this story, or as good as this story in this subject. And so far this is a really hot chapter, although, having read this story several times so far, I know that there are more really hot chapters to follow.

I can't help worry about Shaun and Emma, will they ever return to 'normal', can they ever talk to each other about this. I wish there was more about Emma, obviously Shaun knew nothing of what she'd been doing away from home that led to this.

Not Emma's first party. She's wearing red!! Is Emma Naughty? Or one of Naughtys minions? Is Mike her lover, or suducer?

The color of Mike's or Emma's wrist band isn't mentioned. Does the color of the lingerie indicate party experience or room attended? If room attended that means mild BDSM, if parties attended I have no idea. BUT Emma's lingerie indicates this is NOT her first party.,

Yes!

Performers are colour coded. White is for party virgins. So when people entered the room they could tell that at a glance. After their first time the colour also indicates their nature: red for lustful, pink for submissive for example. The husbands and their wives were classified as performers. Handlers like Denise, Mandi and Rachael not.

Naughty

Shauna doesn't mention a collar, neighter Mike Or Emma are wearing collars. Does that mean they are part of the sex ring/sex group leadership?

Holy Crap!!

This is so sad. This big betrail by Emma makes it Sound Like this Story can only end in violence. Now that Shaun knows who is part of this all it seems Like He is gonna Take Revenge on them by Killing them.

Outstanding. I'm shaking with pleasure reading it xx