by Mnhb
Four wasted pages and he has not penetrated her as yet. Please stop wasting people's time
What a cocktease. You should have put this under romance, not erotic couplings. There were no couplings, let alone erotic ones.
When we cut straight to the slit and thrust we miss so much.
Don't be put off by those who expect a quick fuck. That's not erotic unless you're 12 years old.
The story was erotic, pure and simple. And all the better for it.
I enjoyed the build up of the story and thought of someone in my office building I could picture this happening with. I hope there will be a part two!
Many Vietnamese women are beautiful and seductive. Catching foreign businessman is goal for quite a few.
for those who want a quick fuck, go to xvideos. you want to read a story, some here
I'm going to ignore the negative comments (since they were anticipated) and state that I completely agree with the one that says literotica is erotic literature. I may not be very good at writing literature but I think I understand erotica. It gives me pleasure to write the way I do because I want to provide reading material to 4 out of 6 people that may perhaps enjoy what I write. Thank you 4/6.
I loved it and the story before the great sex. I was in this part of the world and it reminded me of my time in the Corps with a beautiful Thai woman by the name of "Pen"....yes part two please...
The removal of clothing as described by the author might be the best I have ever read. It was very erotic and I slowed my reading speed to savor every second of the description. Thank you very much, Bnhb, for such a wonderful beginning.
Thanks for the wonderful comments on the first part of the story. They really encouraged me to write more. I'm still living in Vietnam and the experience is one of the best I've had in life so far.
Beautiful. Where is the main character from? India? Europe? Thanks!
I have a few Vietnamese colleagues and yes, I'd like to do exactly the same to them as well...extremely sexy story, very much looking forward to the next part(s).