All Comments on 'My Waiting Fantasies'

The developement of the story to the realization that the two found release durning the afternoon movies was well placed within the context of the story. I do hope you have a follow up story relating the fantasies and their blossom.

i loved this story...please keep writing!!

I think we all wait for that one perfect fantasy to come along.. I loved it and could actually see myself in that position..some of Us actually get to live it.. totally awesome loved it.. smiles..

I loved the build-up of sexual tension between the characters. You did an excellent job of setting that up and sustaining it to its (her) climax. Please keep writing! We need more great stories about black people who aren't speaking "ghetto" on this site. I'm a sistah too.