All Comments on 'My Weekend Inside Pandora Ch. 02'

by Suckitupbuttercup

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
All hail the Queen

What a wonderful tail You weave. Such a lucky prince to have come into the realm of such a lovely Queen. So far so excellent Your Exelence!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Question

Will humiliation continue to be a major focus? As you said, people have different tastes, and am rethinking becoming invested here. I liked her the first chapter. Now seeing her I'm bored attitude, not so much. Plus, he now seems to be flavor of the day and not something special to her.

I do like your way of telling a story. I'll wait to see if I like the story before voting.

rdoolittlerdoolittlealmost 8 years ago
On a roll

Nice tale so far. Perhaps you can describe what your character would be wearing and physical characteristics?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent job,

When will you be continuing this story......

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