by Michael142
Wow, don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment. Thinking his little harem should all be pregnant together soon. :-)
A great read! Please keep writing & telling the story of Michael and his harem. A little female on female action would be good too!
I really like this story. It reads well by itself or as the eighth chapter in a saga.
The flaw is your grammatical inconsistency. "He feels Michael's breath on her asshole, and then on her pussy." In context, "He" should be "She" because you are writing about Janet.
Get an editor.
What is it with people wanting a grandfather to knock up younger women???
Let the old man ( my age ) have fun and keep his family happy!!!
Please don't wait too long to finish this story.......too bad it HAS to end!!
(Wish it was me!!! )
The wait for the next chapters of this one is killing me! Another chapter or two soon please. :-)