All Comments on 'My Weekend with Grandpa Pt. 03 Ch. 02'

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barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 9 years ago
Hot And Hotter!

Wow, don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment. Thinking his little harem should all be pregnant together soon. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
HOT!

A great read! Please keep writing & telling the story of Michael and his harem. A little female on female action would be good too!

rhimshot415rhimshot415almost 9 years ago
Great, Flawed Story

I really like this story. It reads well by itself or as the eighth chapter in a saga.

The flaw is your grammatical inconsistency. "He feels Michael's breath on her asshole, and then on her pussy." In context, "He" should be "She" because you are writing about Janet.

Get an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
No pregnancies!!!!

What is it with people wanting a grandfather to knock up younger women???

Let the old man ( my age ) have fun and keep his family happy!!!

Please don't wait too long to finish this story.......too bad it HAS to end!!

(Wish it was me!!! )

barepussloverbarepussloverover 8 years ago
Hi!

The wait for the next chapters of this one is killing me! Another chapter or two soon please. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Hunting the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WOW

I thoroughly enjoyed the entire story.

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