All Comments on 'My Wife and I Saw Magic Mike'

Do not explain something to the reader. As in:

'Asshole,' by the way, is our pet name for each other.

Either write the story in such a way that their playful familiarity/intimacy is obvious, OR do not put in such a one-off detail in there in the first place. It doesn't make the story more realistic (if that was your intention). It only pulls the reader out of the flow of the narrative - pulling the reader out to explain something.

Loving Wives?

At least this was about a married couple in love, having fun with each other!!! That deserves 3*!!! With today's stories, it would have deserved a 4*, but today we had a Slirpuff's story that overshadowed all others...

I enjoyed the story a lot! I used to work as a dancer and it warms my heart to see women bringing thier desires into the mainstream..... Thanks for sharing it with us...

Fun happy couple enjoying each other

I took my wife to see Hostiles. When we got home, she shot me.