by raiderdrm
could have had a little more tease, longer sex scenes - but i liked it! hopefully you'll continue the story.
Sorry for the spelling, I'll do better next time!
Damn great story hope to read chapter 2 soon maybe Drew take your tight ass
I like character and plot development. I understand an open marriage. Do not understand the position of the son in the open marriage.
I liked the story but there was not enough character information you need to continue gave it a 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!