by stevnmom
oversized tits?---So what else is new?
The framework was all there, but there was no real attempt at characterisation - you didn't even name the sisters and "the other husbands" were simply a vague presence on the edge of the picture (it would have been better had they not been there at all) - so there was no emotional connection and scant erotic charge.
Not the most erotic story but very original . I don't think you fucking your wife's sisters is incest besides , if their husbands aren't doing their duty well enough then it's up to you to help out .
Word usage: Neither "new" what was going on beneath the water was my guess, still not complaining I might add The word is"knew" not new The wrong word was used several times in the story. It took away from the story..
Great story so far, really needs names though. All this youngest/oldest brother sister stuff got old. Just make up some names doesn’t matter what they are
For anyone saying that this is in the wrong category, you clearly aren’t thinking of how fucked up it actually was is to fool around with or fuck your SPOUSE’S SIBLING. They are off limits and on the same level of taboo as a step sibling. Even if it isn’t full on incest, it’s extremely taboo and wrong. Not to mention when you start having threesome fantasies about your wife and her sister(s) at the same time ;)
Also, agreed. This could have been punched up and elevated with some better writing choices. Name your characters. If one of your storytelling tropes is that it’s based on reality, change their names. Name your characters, dial up the taboo factor. Otherwise I love the premise.