All Comments on 'My Wife Has Two Sisters'

by stevnmom

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Farmstud30Farmstud30almost 17 years ago
Great Start

Great start to what could be a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More please

very hot. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Drunken encounter between oversized dick and -----

oversized tits?---So what else is new?

Tool_guyTool_guyalmost 17 years ago
Oh hell yes!

A fantasy cum true...

ErotonautErotonautalmost 17 years ago
Too impersonal

The framework was all there, but there was no real attempt at characterisation - you didn't even name the sisters and "the other husbands" were simply a vague presence on the edge of the picture (it would have been better had they not been there at all) - so there was no emotional connection and scant erotic charge.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
So different

Not the most erotic story but very original . I don't think you fucking your wife's sisters is incest besides , if their husbands aren't doing their duty well enough then it's up to you to help out .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Awsome

Can't wait for your next submission! hehe

this story is hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Please continue!!

I love these kinds of stories. Please keep it cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Spot On

Get the next chapter written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
nice sister in-law

Terrific story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Word usage

Word usage: Neither "new" what was going on beneath the water was my guess, still not complaining I might add The word is"knew" not new The wrong word was used several times in the story. It took away from the story..

IncestLoversIncestLoversover 3 years ago

Not incest. Posted in the wrong category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes, technically it is incest. Many states' laws say that it is!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story so far, really needs names though. All this youngest/oldest brother sister stuff got old. Just make up some names doesn’t matter what they are

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

For anyone saying that this is in the wrong category, you clearly aren’t thinking of how fucked up it actually was is to fool around with or fuck your SPOUSE’S SIBLING. They are off limits and on the same level of taboo as a step sibling. Even if it isn’t full on incest, it’s extremely taboo and wrong. Not to mention when you start having threesome fantasies about your wife and her sister(s) at the same time ;)

Also, agreed. This could have been punched up and elevated with some better writing choices. Name your characters. If one of your storytelling tropes is that it’s based on reality, change their names. Name your characters, dial up the taboo factor. Otherwise I love the premise.

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