All Comments on 'My Wife Made Me Do It Ch. 01'

I bet this was written by the swaggering head of state who claims to be the first BLACK dude president. Actually he is a mulatto, not a black. His girl Michelle is a black, she look like a gorilla...yes? You boys thrill the white girls by feeding them the black pipe. If you learned how to write english, you could get white girls to wait in line to take your black snake, in fact I'll pass your stories on to a white sista who craves what you are pushing between your legs there.

It seems like a good story, but the punctuation is horrible. Actually there isn't any punctuation, so I couldn't keep up with the dialog (since there are no marks indicating such). I think the story is good, but the lack of dialog ruined it. I didn't finish reading it all.

Proper example: Yolanda said, "Hello." Then I said, "You're hot."