All Comments on 'My Wife Services the Tenant'

"Sweetie's your husband“

I am male, like most people here. I do not have a husband.

So, who do you think you are talking to? Writing in this second person voice (you, your) never works. You automatically exclude a large part of your audience.

It would also help if you didn't switch from present to past tense at random.

It wasn't bad.

My favorite I have read on literotica! Nice work. I would love to hear more about this trio's escapades.

Thanks for your comments everyone.