All Comments on 'My Wife's 30th Birthday'

by monteleone29

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good opening

great first story and a little awakening. Now what would be great is the second part is told from her point of view of the same situation!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excrement

A nothing story with nothing to recommend it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
nice premise

Nice premise: communication is more important than sex in a marriage. But if it’s sex you value, good communication has the ability to improve that as well.

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It would have been more effective had you expanded the discussion between them. You essentially summarized. It’s nearly impossible to build up any emotion or tension with a summary that includes resolution of the problem. With her insecurity, we expect it to take more than a few words to get her to understand his point and accept it emotionally to the extent she will be willing to tell him secrets that might not be accepted very well by him. We’re willing to take the time to read the longer version of what you take the time to write.

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