All Comments on 'My Wife's Sister'

My S-I-L was also great at deep throating. She couldn't seem to get enough. Her parents basement, my family room and even driving her home from Baltimore. She also loved anal because she couldn't get pregnant that way. A pure joy, watching her grow up into a fine woman.

hope you can write a second chapter about your wife joining and you finding out that the sisters had been enjoying each other since early in their life

Perhaps you could at least give them names.

Great story but we need their names and some background. HOT parts, now you should have the husband and SIL get it on more &

watch it grow into hotter sex and other things ........... thank you !!

whens next chapter? good one!

Thanks for sharing.

That was an okay start for a series. Next you have to name them and flesh them out a bit and make the chapters at least two pages long.

Well, when is next?? She goes cross country, got trainned, and started her new job. Meet a co-worker, female, same age, brings her to meet BiL, who fucks them both while wife is at work. Then they get caught when wife comes home early, but all's well that ends well. Right?? Keep writing.

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Well done. Participants identified, desires confirmed/established, potential for three some planted.

A couple of typos that Proof Reading should have caught.

The length is ideal. Continued comfortably short stories will expose your talents as a writer to more readers, there-by building readers within your following,