All Comments on 'Myla'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot strap-on action

I love reading strap-on stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Loved it

I like strap on action also and there was just enough in your story to keep it interesting and very hot. I hope you are that hot also as that is the way I picture you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
worked for me!

wonderful

lovercat2942lovercat2942almost 16 years ago
A good beginning

Cute little coming-of-age story about Myla, but there was too much narrative with much of the sex coming across as too clinical and somewhat contrived. Had its good points, though. Nice verbal interaction between the characters outside the sex arena. Good, believable human characters. I look forward to seeing future efforts by this author.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
hot hot hot

Oh my god

this is one of the frist iv read in my life and the strap on action relly did ot for me , iv read a few before this and this really set me off keep the work comming a bit more detail into there orgasms would have been nice but sill great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HOT!

That was so hot, I had to turn a fan on. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It was fucking amazing. A little more work on spelling. Other than that I think you should continue with this story, got me crazy wet!

Arago007Arago007over 10 years ago
Really loved it...

That's as brutal as I can get, this story was hot!

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