by clitlovr89422
I like strap on action also and there was just enough in your story to keep it interesting and very hot. I hope you are that hot also as that is the way I picture you.
Cute little coming-of-age story about Myla, but there was too much narrative with much of the sex coming across as too clinical and somewhat contrived. Had its good points, though. Nice verbal interaction between the characters outside the sex arena. Good, believable human characters. I look forward to seeing future efforts by this author.
Oh my god
this is one of the frist iv read in my life and the strap on action relly did ot for me , iv read a few before this and this really set me off keep the work comming a bit more detail into there orgasms would have been nice but sill great work
It was fucking amazing. A little more work on spelling. Other than that I think you should continue with this story, got me crazy wet!