All Comments on 'Mystery Meeting'

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JJJJeffJJJJeffover 6 years ago

Outstanding debut!

The chance encounter that leads to more is a favorite fantasy and it is well described here.

*applauds*

More please. And soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I-You Sentence Structure

I or You started the vast majority of the sentences. I did this or You did that.

As an exercise.. rewrite without using I or you at the beginning of any sentence. I will be a very different and more arousing story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Grrrrrrrrrrrr

A woman after my own heart!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What store????

Oh to find this store - yum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Licking lips...

Chance encounters are indeed a favorite.... topic/ read. Lovely! If this is a “debut”, may I say Encore Madam!

👄❤️🌹

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 6 years ago
Produce dept.

Have had great time in produce section of my supermarket...love talking food and recipes with men among other things....BTW great first time out, great fantasy. Can't wait to read what happens next or read next fantasy. Thank you.

EroticRomanticManEroticRomanticManabout 4 years ago
Great story

Thank you for writing this story! I enjoyed reading it very much! I liked how your painted a realistic picture of the participants and their fucking! ERM

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