by BoiseVixen
Outstanding debut!
The chance encounter that leads to more is a favorite fantasy and it is well described here.
*applauds*
More please. And soon!
I or You started the vast majority of the sentences. I did this or You did that.
As an exercise.. rewrite without using I or you at the beginning of any sentence. I will be a very different and more arousing story
Chance encounters are indeed a favorite.... topic/ read. Lovely! If this is a “debut”, may I say Encore Madam!
👄❤️🌹
Have had great time in produce section of my supermarket...love talking food and recipes with men among other things....BTW great first time out, great fantasy. Can't wait to read what happens next or read next fantasy. Thank you.
Thank you for writing this story! I enjoyed reading it very much! I liked how your painted a realistic picture of the participants and their fucking! ERM