All Comments on 'Mystery Prize Ch. 02'

by Kot_Carson

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marcus48marcus48over 13 years ago
sail on

Hope its a long cruise.

HamsterHamsterover 13 years ago
Kind of Childish

Sorry to say, it wasn't very hot and it wasn't very funny. Too much like kid's games and not adult games.

Kot_CarsonKot_Carsonover 13 years agoAuthor
I appreciate the feedback

I appreciate your feedback, Hamster. What changes would you suggest to be made in future chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very well done!

You can never go wrong with a BJ contest and I thought you did a great job.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 8 years ago

I doubt they will have this contest on my Hawaii cruise. But I can dream!

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