All Comments on 'Naked & Horny'

Hi, well done on a good story. You need someone to 'proof-read' the story for a few errors here and there. You could add to your experiences by using your imagination more and composing stories about your 'progress'. Have fun and keep writing.

Very well written story. Good grammar and syntax, and just descriptive enough to be intriguing without overdoing it. You most definitely could use some good editing, however, to catch the word usage errors. For example, one does not "peal" clothing, it is "peeled" instead. Nevertheless, I gave it a high rating for its overall quality. Keep up the good work!

Wife and I did a Hedonism II trip some years back. The sights and sounds kept me at least semi hard the whole week. The wife, a Southern Baptist, was wetter and hotter than ever. Loved watching others, and eventually having others watch us. Just looking at people tells you nothing about their style and desires. Had lunch on the nude side one day with a very nice, and a bit shy, young couple. That evening, a walk along the beach side, looking in lighted rooms. Saw her with two men, neither her husband. Got a beach chair, bent the wife over it and did her doggie style so we could both watch and listen to our new friend. We later wondered where the husband may have been. A bar, getting drunk? Another room with the wives of the two men? Who knows.lol Be careful on your return trip, having a couple ask and seeing the male become hard because of you will lead to hot sex. lol

This was one of the most exciting stories i've read on here partly being my wife and i want so deperately to try this type of thing out. I only wish we had the resources to do so. We constantly talk about it and what it would be like to be naked in public and around others naked. It has lead to MANY wonderful sexual episodes for us. I can only imagine what it would be like for real! GREAT STORY!!!

Yes, great story!

Brings back memories, wife and I have been to Hedo II Negril a few times, as well as other Jamaican c/o resorts. Like the story, we are not into the lifestyle, but enjoyed teasing each other (and others teasing us) and dabbling at the perimeters of the lifestyle. OK, we did have a few transgressions..... Whew!

I also fantasize about having sex with multiple couples but at the end of the day maybe it is not reality?