All Comments on 'Naked Boy Cleaning Service'

I liked the way you conveyed Nate's hesitance, how you shared his paradoxical attraction, and showed us in his actions the irresistible lure of his attraction.

Tom's dominance was a nice complement. He was quietly imposing, and undeniably clear in expressing what he wanted. That kind of confidence is something most people can't help admiring, even if they try not to.

I'm guessing you lost some folks with the little bit of pee play. Funny how folks have no problem with blow jobs or face fucking, but just a tiny few drops and they're gone. The story is in the Fetish category, so what did they expect.

Anyway, I'm off to read Ch. 02. I like your storytelling. Hope you keep writing.