All Comments on 'Naked Came The Ranger'

The writing of this story conveyed emotions very clearly that only a few writers on Literotica can accomplish. 5*

I very much appreciate the compliment.

Excellent story beautifully written.

This resonated with me on many levels. I once taught at a liberal arts college in Oregon. I went hiking there, and enjoyed the waterfalls in a local state park. My girlfriend broke up with me recently -- a relationship that I had thought would lead to a marriage. Zach and Val's foreplay reminded me of my deceased wife -- she loved to stroke my dick, enjoying feeling how "huge and hard" she could make me. (I finally figured out your pseudonym.) And the Mrs. and I once packed a picnic lunch, ate it at a secluded spot in a nearby state park, and then got naked between two blankets and enjoyed a splendid outdoor fuck in bright sunshine.

Very well written, very sympathetic characters. Enjoyable read! More, please!

Thank you and of course I want more

North

You've made me want to add Oregon to my bucket list!

Yet ANOTHER story relying on the big cock crutch for excitement. Plot had potential but fizzled quickly. No suspense or intrigue here and an abrupt, unfinished ending. Which, was alarmingly similar to the rest of the plot development - - unfinished.

Loved it!!!

Does relieve so much tension and freedom of cloth. The gentle breeze on the skin besides the hot springs relaxing all muscles. Invigorating to see others enjoying sharing naked times together. Good read hope ya continue !!!!