by yakboy69
You have a professional way about your writing. You have kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. That goes for the other two chapters as well. Can't wait for number 4.
Totally enjoying your story. Very erotic and exciting. Good length and dialogue is very readable and realistic. You're now on my favorites list as this story had me reading some of your others which are just as good.
This was the best story I have read so far. Can't wait to read about the stranger bjF