All Comments on 'Naked Desire'

by VelvetTipper

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 19 years ago
One hot story!

This is a hot sensuous storyof raw hot sex! It's great!

46018377jp46018377jpabout 18 years ago
Fuck Heidi

What can I say VELVETTIPPER. Another great fucking story. While reading thestory I fucked Heidi at least five times with a hot hard prick that you gave me. Thank you. All that sucking and fucking and cunt eating has left me with allmost no choice but to fuck my fist. I`ll look at your picture while I`m doing it and imagine what the rest of your body looks like. If it`s anything like your ass you are a beautiful woman. John P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

I think my cock needs her sweet raw pussy on it and ill fuck her eye socket than shoot her with my 9mm and fuck the corpse and than i'd cut holes in her tits and fuck them too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Too Quick

You set up the encounter well, suggesting that her boyfriend was away and that she was horny. But then, this other guy comes in, she welcomes him in and suddenly jumps him. Why? Isn't she in love with her boyfriend? Is there no concern for her (theoretically) monogamous relationship with him?

Then Tom, who wasn't supposed to be there at all, suddenly shows up and after some time apart his is surprisingly unromantic.

The psychological profiles don't seem to match in this story.

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