All Comments on 'Naked Fun Ch. 02'

Nice story. However it should be Alice who should be helping out putting Jr's cock back in his mom's pussy and not the Dad. It looks gay'ish for the dad holding the son's cock.

Looking back at the author's profile his orientation is straight anyway.

Reads like cliff notes. Need more content for me at least.

Suitable for adolescent masturbation but certainly not qualified to be considered adult erotica.

It's a nice, a very nice, story of a boy, Jr., doing some real close and very personal mommy-loving. But I think rodav is wrong about any gay-ish aspect. First, because dad's been giving it to his baby girl, good and hard, up that pretty little hole she's got between her slender legs. More important, because I see the father's act of reintroducing Jr.'s penis to the vagina the kid came out of as signaling dad's approval of his boy as a lusty young motherfucker. Jr.'s father is acknowledging his boy's right to a son's share of his own mother's cunt. From now on mother Mary's precious cunt will be filled to the brim with family semen. Some from her husband Jim's heavy loaded balls (he's got to keep plenty of it for his baby girl Alice's tight little twat). But most from her baby boy Jr.'s hot young balls that never quit. The kid's a nonstop semen producing machine, and his mom's the delighted beneficiary. Thanks, NM, for a great story. More, please.

This and the first chapter are a decent start but you need to take time to introduce the individuals. Put a little background information in the story line. Then build up to the sex and it will be an awesome series.

please ignore the complainers who never write anything themselves but just complain about most every thing..Please write more..

WOW - very arousing and HOT ..... now you need to give us more details, how tall was Mom and more about her assets.. the same with Jr. like how tall, weight and how big is his cock. Now since Jr and Mom had screwed; they now start to plan and play more. Of course you must give us more info on Dad and Alice !! Thanks.

Thanks for sharing.

I would like to thank all those who take time to comment on my little stories. I am very new to this and I consider all comments.

could see this coming from chapter one

One of the best I've seen, I'll be paying attention to you from now on.

This story had high potential but Sadly someone didnt wanna spend the time on it.

For sharing.

would be better to have my two sisters join mom and me in the shower...my step dad could go other places