All Comments on 'Naked Hot Tub Fun'

by JamesSD

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Excellent

One of the best I've ever read on this site... really hot story and you put a lot of effort into your writing... thanks for sharing...

MegamuffinMegamuffinalmost 17 years ago
Fun story

And those were good times.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good but

I enjoyed the story; but, I have never liked reading disclaimers beforehand. I prefer to assume it's fiction, safe, yada yada yada.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Too hot!

Cool me off! I liked your story very much.

But please note the difference:

mostly discrete, done privately ==> mostly _discreet_. Use the latter, meaning 'secret and tactful', not the former, meaning 'one item or event at a time'.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very Nice

Very Nice, great read, keep em coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
SWEET!

Wow, good build up even if it happened fast, i loved it, always with it's turns

KEEP IT UP!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
way to show love

jesus thank god i'm not your friend. make fun of him have all women take pity on him, and make him a licker. here I thought make him a decent fuck with promise, but hell no make him the creepy third wheel that everyone pity. by the way I like the way u made sure you were king dick and have the magic touch, and made sure your ego was stroke through out the whole story. it your story and you can write it anyway you please and yes I know I didn't have to read it. but you to could had made it fun not just for u but everyone. do me a favor why not pat dave head and tell him he's a good boy or take him out back and show him some kindness by shoot him. it better then the way your treated him as a friend king dick.

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