by ISKwest
The story was well written, just didn't care for the subject matter. I didn't find anything erotic about the story.
A great story about the emotional roller coaster that come after a threesome. Well written, showing the two interpretations of both loving partners crossing the boundary of fantasy to reality. There is a saying that 'a man opens his legs to have sex while a woman opens her heart and makes love. I think your story touches on this. Looking forward to the nest 3 chapter.
Well done, entirely believable and real. It took a while to figure out just what had happened. Very good sex scene, too.
Original and unusual. I have no idea where you're headed, but I'm along for the ride.
Well done!