All Comments on 'Naked in the Naked City'

Penn Station – Since Penn Station is a well-known train station IN New York you may want to specify where you’re leaving from or risk confusing your readers!

Champagne bottles needing corkscrews? And Dom Perignon isn’t exactly what some “relatively?” poor college students would be buying!

They left from the Penn Station in Baltimore. You're right, I didn't specify that but I did include Maryland as the state that Troy and Miles departed from. As far as the cost of the champagne, these girls could have earned enough money from summer jobs to afford it, in addition to being lucky enough to have doting, well-off parents. Details, details.

I hope all four of you found happiness in the following years.

I realize this is a romance story. It is a shame they could not make it work. But sometimes memories are so vivid. It did remind me of my very first love. I was in the ninth grade, she was in the eight grade. Even now 49 years later I still remember how bitter sweet our last kiss was. Like Bob Hope said, "Thanks for the memories".

Just right!

I felt like I was there...

I wished I was there!!! :+))

Can that be arranged? :+))