All Comments on 'Naked Portraits Pt. 10'

Made it thru chapter ten and enjoy the various story lines. Each chapter has a primary focus and a side trip for a different adventure.

Suggest to your editors the following tip: Read the story top to bottom, but read each line from RIGHT to left. You will be amazed how many valid, correctly spelled words are incorrect in the sentence (passed versus past, for example)

Now, on the the next chapter.

Thanks for the constructive advice. Clearly my editor can used the help. Glad you like the story. I love writing them. I'm up to part 16 working on 17.