All Comments on 'Naked Stage Fright'

It would have more interesting had the striptease been an unexpected side-effect of the treatment (maybe she misunderstood the old line about imagining everyone else naked, and thought that "everyone" had to include herself), rather than some premeditated conspiracy, especially as you'd made a point of explaining that hypnosis can't make anyone do something they don't want to do. You could have had her slip out of her choir outfit during the service, revealing she was wearing nothing beneath. The end was especially jarring, sorry.

A great sense of irony and surprise for such a young writer. Keep up the great work!

Fucking garbage.......kill 'em all

Well written little piece - Guess I'll look to see what else you have submitted. Might be up later tonight than I had planned.

nice story with unexpected ending. Ironic and fun. Keep writing. G.Belgium

Great story! It made me pretty HOT and it had quite an unexpected ending! I really enjoyed reading it! Cant wait to read more of your stories, which i'm going to do right now!! hugs!!

Great story! It made me pretty HOT and it had quite an unexpected ending! I really enjoyed reading it! Cant wait to read more of your stories, which i'm going to do right now!! hugs!!

Never saw that one coming. But I'll bet she'll see something cumming. Nicely done change on the usual "hypnotized nice lady" theme.

Nice twist at the end.

Went from a “respect for her being a beautiful woman” to calling her a slut and whore in no time flat.

why can't a woman who strips off just do it and leave it at that? doesn't really need to have sex with any man present. my wife will happily strip off in public, a bar, pub, party, whatever, but doesn't need to fuck anyone until she and I get home.