All Comments on 'Naked Under Her Coat Ch. 02: After the Coat'

I have gone shoping for shoes and a dress with just a coat on. Love Jan

You've done it again; I enjoyed your first story, but this one was even better. How I would love to meet such a woman.

Becky seems to have a lot less IQ than a rock

The story starting by her complaining that she can't act again like a cheap stiper again & the pics & videos made her life miserable.

Like what did she expect tho? Thats why you avoiding to leave evidences behind you.

In the end ofc she ended naked multiple times

with some ppl taking more naked pics of her

& she even got naked three times in less than 24h for money

& also proposed to give a video of her for more money...

This looks still like exibitionism or whoring???

On the other hand ofc we have her cuck, who will do nothing when ppl pushing her to get naked & take pics of her...

So untill now in two chapters we have no real story,

just random events written together

& the main characters seems brainless.

You cant develop your caracters

& you can't rly put a line between exibitionism & whoring...

You have to deside what do you want to write for,

because this is a mix of a cuck stoty, a whore wife/gf & an exibitionism one...

You have better storys than this

This "story" until now has the slopiest writing from all your storys.